Monday, June 6, 2016

Hello, this is Park Hyeok Jun / Assignemtn 2 / Friday 5-6

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m464hDxW1ek&feature=youtu.be 

 

this is my presentation ^^

 

Have a nice day

 

Hyeok Jun

1 comment:

  1. Self -evaluation

    Date: 2016-06-17

    Presenter: Park Hyeok Jun
    Evaluator: Park Hyeok Jun


    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    To be harsh on myself, I think I don't really have any particualt strong points.
    I speak fast, which is an old habit. That might be a strong point in some cases, but not in this case.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I think I told them quite well about how skin ages and how to protect their skin
    from aging fast.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    I prepared, but not to the extent that I don't need to look at my script. I looked at it quite a few times.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    I thought I talked more clearly than the last time and more audibly than the last time. But compared to other presenters, mine was not that clear or audible.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    I think I split the part into those three properly.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    I used notes more than I should have. Because I didn't memorize the whole script. I tried to made as many eye contacts as possible, but watching the video, I realized that I didn't really gave eye contact that many.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Speaking more slowly, looking at the notes less, and looking more at the audience.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I thought the content itself was quite interesting, as it is what people my age would have interest in.

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