Speaker: Park Ji Hyun Evaluator: Bang Kyung Hyun Her presentation felt not only interesting but also informative for me. The most impressive thing is her proper use of quotation in her last part in presentation. Her proper use of visual aids made me understand more vividly. Considering her useful content, I think she may have prepared hard for presentation. Her presentation are well-organized overall. Her body paragraph about "poop water" so clearly divided into three parts : what omni processor is, how it works and what impact it can has. Her voice tone was calm and eye contact was not awkward.
Speaking Feedback Date : 2016/06/13 Speaker: Ji Hyun Park Evaluator: Hyunyoung Kang Title :Omni Processor
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She explains and delivers the information to the audience very well. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
By describing the process of omni processor, the audience was perfectly able to know about the omni processor. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, she looked confident and comfortable when talking about the subject. 4.Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, the voice was clear and audible enough to get a thorough understading of omni processor.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She clearly mentions the things that she will discuss in the opening, body and in conclusion. She used a saying to wrap up her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She used her notes very well, but made little eye contact with the audience. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It might have been better if she didn't look on her notes too much. 8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the way she explained how the omni processor works by using the photo, it was much easier to get approach about the process.
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ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Park Ji Hyun
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Bang Kyung Hyun
Her presentation felt not only interesting but also informative for me. The most impressive thing is her proper use of quotation in her last part in presentation. Her proper use of visual aids made me understand more vividly. Considering her useful content, I think she may have prepared hard for presentation. Her presentation are well-organized overall. Her body paragraph about "poop water" so clearly divided into three parts : what omni processor is, how it works and what impact it can has. Her voice tone was calm and eye contact was not awkward.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 2016/06/13
Speaker: Ji Hyun Park
Evaluator: Hyunyoung Kang
Title :Omni Processor
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She explains and delivers the information to the audience very well.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
By describing the process of omni processor, the audience was perfectly able to know about the omni processor.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, she looked confident and comfortable when talking about the subject.
4.Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, the voice was clear and audible enough to get a thorough understading of omni processor.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She clearly mentions the things that she will discuss in the opening, body and in conclusion. She used a saying to wrap up her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She used her notes very well, but made little eye contact with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It might have been better if she didn't look on her notes too much.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the way she explained how the omni processor works by using the photo, it was much easier to get approach about the process.