She has such a loud and clear voice, which is easy to understand. Not only that, she knows how to make a presentation. She knows when to emphasize and pause. Her topic was "Dungeons & Dragons The what and how"(D&D for short). For those we never heard of this, she begins her presentation with the word, role play games. Then everyone got to know what the speech is about. Some kind of games. I think it was an okay introduction. Her preparation was absolutely adequate. She did not even bring any notecards as she memorized everything beforehand. Her speech had both a definite opening, body and conclusion. However, the introduction could be more interesting and effective as i think. There could be some people who do not know what role play games are, just like me. Her eye contact was okay. Everything was great but as I already said above, the topic was slightly hard to understand for the people like me who never play games at home. Besides that, this speech was actually really good :)) I sometimes do envy her amazing presentation skills!
Voice and eye contact was clear, but since the topic was about role-playing games, I feel like I could have been more dramatic with the gestures and voice pitch. I wrote the speech thinking that everyone knows about Role-Playing Games, and it may have caused confusion for some people. It would have been better if I had explained some of the more obscure mechanics in detail, and possibly given examples of how the actual game would progress. I had to cut out parts of the speech because it was too long, and I feel that my topic was probably not one that could be explained in less than 10 minutes. All in all, the presenting was good, but the topic could have been more specific.
Presenter: Soo-hyun Jeong
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Juyeon Lee
She has such a loud and clear voice, which is easy to understand. Not only that, she knows how to make a presentation. She knows when to emphasize and pause. Her topic was "Dungeons & Dragons The what and how"(D&D for short). For those we never heard of this, she begins her presentation with the word, role play games. Then everyone got to know what the speech is about. Some kind of games. I think it was an okay introduction. Her preparation was absolutely adequate. She did not even bring any notecards as she memorized everything beforehand. Her speech had both a definite opening, body and conclusion. However, the introduction could be more interesting and effective as i think. There could be some people who do not know what role play games are, just like me. Her eye contact was okay. Everything was great but as I already said above, the topic was slightly hard to understand for the people like me who never play games at home. Besides that, this speech was actually really good :)) I sometimes do envy her amazing presentation skills!
Self-evaluation
ReplyDeleteVoice and eye contact was clear, but since the topic was about role-playing games, I feel like I could have been more dramatic with the gestures and voice pitch. I wrote the speech thinking that everyone knows about Role-Playing Games, and it may have caused confusion for some people. It would have been better if I had explained some of the more obscure mechanics in detail, and possibly given examples of how the actual game would progress. I had to cut out parts of the speech because it was too long, and I feel that my topic was probably not one that could be explained in less than 10 minutes. All in all, the presenting was good, but the topic could have been more specific.