Presenter: Jayne Yoo Evaluator: Soo-hyun Jeong Car designing process - conveyed clear steps and well-organized information. Could tell that the speech was much thought out and practiced. Voice pitch was okay, but the general pace was monotonous - pauses or changes in volume (bigger voice for emphasis) would be more effective in maintaining listeners' attention. Voice was clear and easy to understand. Visual aid: Showing the four stages each was very helpful, since just explaining the designing process would not make sense. If the speaker's intention was to show the listeners how different the process is from what they might expect, then that aspect could have been emphasized a bit more. Letting them speculate about the process during the opener, or comparing the real process to the stereotype that most people think.
Presenter: Jayne Yoo Evaluator: Juyeon Lee Informative and quite interesting topic. I think it was nice that she started the presentation with her personal experience. Voice volume was not bad but need more pauses and it would be more effective if you emphasize some parts more dramatically. Visual aid: The visual aid was really helpful to understand the contents. Since this presentation is a procedure of car designing, i think picture is essential. However, I think you need more interaction with the audience. It was a little bit boring just to sit down and listen. If there was 'finish with a bang' in the end, it would be much better.
It was an interesting presentation in that it taught us something that is unexpected. Her voice was moderately good, and speed was slightly slow in my opinion, but not to the extent that it makes the presentation boring. Her speed was what I was envious of to be honest, because speaking too fast is my bad habit. The visual aid was simple and easy to understand. Her gesture was also nice. Like the evalautor above said, it would have been nicer if the presenter finished the presentation with a bang.
Presenter: Jayne Yoo
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Car designing process - conveyed clear steps and well-organized information. Could tell that the speech was much thought out and practiced.
Voice pitch was okay, but the general pace was monotonous - pauses or changes in volume (bigger voice for emphasis) would be more effective in maintaining listeners' attention.
Voice was clear and easy to understand.
Visual aid: Showing the four stages each was very helpful, since just explaining the designing process would not make sense.
If the speaker's intention was to show the listeners how different the process is from what they might expect, then that aspect could have been emphasized a bit more. Letting them speculate about the process during the opener, or comparing the real process to the stereotype that most people think.
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Informative and quite interesting topic. I think it was nice that she started the presentation with her personal experience.
Voice volume was not bad but need more pauses and it would be more effective if you emphasize some parts more dramatically.
Visual aid: The visual aid was really helpful to understand the contents. Since this presentation is a procedure of car designing, i think picture is essential.
However, I think you need more interaction with the audience. It was a little bit boring just to sit down and listen. If there was 'finish with a bang' in the end, it would be much better.
Presenter: Jayne Yoo
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It was an interesting presentation in that it taught us something that is unexpected. Her voice was moderately good, and speed was slightly slow in my opinion, but not to the extent that it makes the presentation boring. Her speed was what I was envious of to be honest, because speaking too fast is my bad habit. The visual aid was simple and easy to understand. Her gesture was also nice. Like the evalautor above said, it would have been nicer if the presenter finished the presentation with a bang.