Date: 4/21 Evaluator: Soo-hyun Jeong The opening part was somewhat unclear from the main part, but the closer was quite clear. The speaker described the life of Nolan Bushnell, how he rose to success and the reason the speaker admires him. However, the speaker could have done better if he had described, in finer detail, what part of Bushnell he admired. For one, the speaker could have given any examples of the games he had created and the speaker liked. There were some pauses that were on the verge of being awkward, but having no notes and great eye contact suggests that he had memorized his speech by heart. It would have been better if the speaker was slightly more fluent in his speech. But the speech itself was very informative, gave clear pointers about Bushnell's life and the speaker showed little sign of anxiety.
Seunghyeok Yang: I think he memorized his script so it sounded more sincere. I like he gave constant eye contact to camera. If he had used more clear gestures then it would have been better.
Date: 4/21
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Soo-hyun Jeong
The opening part was somewhat unclear from the main part, but the closer was quite clear. The speaker described the life of Nolan Bushnell, how he rose to success and the reason the speaker admires him. However, the speaker could have done better if he had described, in finer detail, what part of Bushnell he admired. For one, the speaker could have given any examples of the games he had created and the speaker liked. There were some pauses that were on the verge of being awkward, but having no notes and great eye contact suggests that he had memorized his speech by heart. It would have been better if the speaker was slightly more fluent in his speech. But the speech itself was very informative, gave clear pointers about Bushnell's life and the speaker showed little sign of anxiety.
Seunghyeok Yang: I think he memorized his script so it sounded more sincere. I like he gave constant eye contact to camera. If he had used more clear gestures then it would have been better.
ReplyDeleteDate: 4.22
Deletespeaker: Jaewoo yoo
Evaluater: Seunghyeok yang