Monday, April 18, 2016

Juyeon Lee / A Great Vacation Idea / Friday 5-6

3 comments:

  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 21th April, 2016
    Speaker: Juyeon Lee
    Evaluator: Juyeon Lee
    Title : The Perfect Vacation Plan

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    Clear voice, informative content and various gestures.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    The speech subject that the speaker said was very clear and obvious. The speaker delivered the subject very well.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. The speaker did not even look at the script or note card.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. The speaker's voice was very clear and easy to understand. She used pauses a lot in very effective ways.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    I think opening was very interesting. As not many people know lots of information about the city like Oslo, asking a question like this time was a great idea. Body was well-organized as well. There were 3 main points; basic information, recommended activities and some useful tips. Conclusion was simple. The speaker had a nice understanding about the audience. She could suggest a travel idea to the audience as she figured out who the audience is.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She tried to keep eye contact with the audience, which was very good. She did not use the note at all, but it does not look like a problem.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    It would be nice if the speech was more interactive with the audience. Opening was good but rest of the speech was quite one-sided

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I am quite satisfied with what I did. (:

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 22th April, 2016
    Speaker: Juyeon Lee
    Evaluator: Yeonjin You
    Title : The Perfect Vacation Plan

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    She had clear voice. She also memorized all so she did various gesture.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    She delivered the subject very well in speech. So I could understand the subject very clearly.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. she prepared content of speech very well. And she did not look at the note card.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. Her voice was very clear and easy to understand.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    I think the opening was very interesting. Especially her question about capital city was great and made people get interests about her speech. Body was organized very well and conclusion was well-summarized as well.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    Because she memorized her speech well, she had adequate eye contacts.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Actually I absolutely satisfied with her speech. Probably if she prepared some visual aids about places of Oslo, it would be better.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I like her contents of the speech. I can get interesting information about Oslo. I also like her voice tone and speed.

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