Monday, April 18, 2016

최승연 / a person I admire / friday 5,6

2 comments:

  1. Date: 4/22
    Speaker: Seongyeon Choi
    Evaluator: Soojung Lee
    Title: A person i admire



    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    It was clealy delivered that why she admires Helen Keller.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    The audience clearly got what she was trying to say.
    3. Did the speech adequate preparation?
    It did. She used her note cards and it seemed like she had her points written in there.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, she had a very clear and strong delivery
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    It did. She started off her talk with a question. She elaborated on her reasons why she admires Helen Keller. Lastly, she recommended others to respect her will power.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She used her note cards very well and she tried to make as much eye contacts as possible.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    She could have make little more eye contact and have more lively intonation while giving a speech
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked how she ended her speech.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016.04.22
    Speaker: seungyeon choi
    Evaluator: jaeyeon jeong
    Title : a person i admire

    1. What strong points does the speaker have? 
    The speaker used the notes effectively.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I was able to know well about a person who she admired. I think she did lots of research.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? 
    Yes, she did.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, she did. I was able to understand fully what she was say.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? 
    Yes, the opening was especially good

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. 
    She used the notes effectively.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? 
    She should have more intonation.

    8. What did you like about the presentation? 
    The opening was especially good.

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