Date : 2016.04.22 Speaker: Kim Miji Evaluator: Kim Miji (self-evaluation) Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? The overall speech was clearly delivered. Tone and diction were good. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I think the subject was well delivered with reasons why I admire Steve Jobs. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. The speech was well memorized and almost didn’t make any mistake. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. The overall speech was clear and audible. There was no difficulty understanding. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? There were definite opening with some questions and saying, organized body, and a clear conclusion with summary and quote. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I prepared note cards but didn’t rely on it too much, and the eye contact was good enough. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I should have used more hand gestures and have an interaction with the audience (It seems that asking question at the opening was the only interaction I had with the audience). 8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked the speed of the speech, because I tried hard to overcome my habit of speaking too fast.
Date : 2016.04.22 Speaker: Kim Miji Evaluator: Kang Hyunyoung Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She has a strong delivery. Her voice is clear and easy to understand. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Since her voice was clear and audible, the audience didn't seem to have difficulty in knowing the speech subject. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? I believe so. She sounded like she knows well about the life of Steve Jobs and his personalities. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes, and I think this is the strongest point about her speech. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes, she used a question for an opener, a quotation as a closer, and a signal “to wrap up” to begin her conclusion, which made the structure more organized. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She used note cards effectively, but I think she made little eye contact with the audience. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? She looks a little nervous and serious, I think she will look much better if she feels comfortable and relaxed next time. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked the tone of her voice and I think she uses pause very well in delivering her speech. I also liked her use of quotation to end the speech.
Date : 2016.04.22 Speaker: Kim Miji Evaluator: Lee Soojung Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? It was clealy delivered that why she admires Steve jobs. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The audience clearly got what Miji was trying to say. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? It did. The content was great and it seemed like she had prepared for the speech before. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes, she had a very clear and strong delivery 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? It did. She started off with a question and she ended with a quote. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She used her note cards very well and she tried to make as much eye contacts as possible. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? She could have used some gestures to point out her strongest point. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked the content and how she informed Steve Jobs.
Speaking Feedback Date : 2016.04.22 Speaker: miji kim Evaluator: jaeyeon jeong Title : a person i admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? The speaker did lots of eye contacts with the audience
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? She delivered about the person she admire clearly.I was able to know well about her subject.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? The speaker seemed like she did lots of research on the figure of subject
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes, she did
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes, the opening was especially good
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. she used the notes effectively
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think she needs to use more gestures
8. What did you like about the presentation? The opening was unconventional
Date : 2016.04.22
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Kim Miji
Evaluator: Kim Miji (self-evaluation)
Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The overall speech was clearly delivered. Tone and diction were good.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I think the subject was well delivered with reasons why I admire Steve Jobs.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. The speech was well memorized and almost didn’t make any mistake.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. The overall speech was clear and audible. There was no difficulty understanding.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
There were definite opening with some questions and saying, organized body, and a clear conclusion with summary and quote.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I prepared note cards but didn’t rely on it too much, and the eye contact was good enough.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I should have used more hand gestures and have an interaction with the audience (It seems that asking question at the opening was the only interaction I had with the audience).
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the speed of the speech, because I tried hard to overcome my habit of speaking too fast.
Date : 2016.04.22
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Kim Miji
Evaluator: Kang Hyunyoung
Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She has a strong delivery. Her voice is clear and easy to understand.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Since her voice was clear and audible, the audience didn't seem to have difficulty in knowing the speech subject.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
I believe so. She sounded like she knows well about the life of Steve Jobs and his personalities.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, and I think this is the strongest point about her speech.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, she used a question for an opener, a quotation as a closer, and a signal “to wrap up” to begin her conclusion, which made the structure more organized.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She used note cards effectively, but I think she made little eye contact with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
She looks a little nervous and serious, I think she will look much better if she feels comfortable and relaxed next time.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the tone of her voice and I think she uses pause very well in delivering her speech. I also liked her use of quotation to end the speech.
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ReplyDeleteDate : 2016.04.22
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Kim Miji
Evaluator: Lee Soojung
Title : The person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
It was clealy delivered that why she admires Steve jobs.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The audience clearly got what Miji was trying to say.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
It did. The content was great and it seemed like she had prepared for the speech before.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she had a very clear and strong delivery
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
It did. She started off with a question and she ended with a quote.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She used her note cards very well and she tried to make as much eye contacts as possible.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
She could have used some gestures to point out her strongest point.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the content and how she informed Steve Jobs.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 2016.04.22
Speaker: miji kim
Evaluator: jaeyeon jeong
Title : a person i admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The speaker did lots of eye contacts with the audience
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
She delivered about the person she admire clearly.I was able to know well about her subject.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
The speaker seemed like she did lots of research on the figure of subject
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she did
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, the opening was especially good
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
she used the notes effectively
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she needs to use more gestures
8. What did you like about the presentation?
The opening was unconventional