Speaking Feedback Date: 16/04/22 Speaker: Jayne Yoo Evaluator: Yeon Jin You Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She maintained good speed and tone, so I could understand her speech very well.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? It was easy to find out that she is talking about the vacation idea to Cuba.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. Her contents was informative and she also prepared the presentation slides. One thing is that it would have been better if she memorized more of her scripts so she didn’t have to look at the note so often.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. Her voice and tone was clear and audible. The speed was good too.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. It was well structure, but seemed to not have the preview part.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. It would have been better if she didn’t held her note card too high and read directly from it. I think making more eye contacts with audience is needed.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think, smiling less and speak more formally would have helped her look more professional. Also, making more eye contacts and using smaller note card would have improved the speech.
8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked the contents of the speech. Also, adequate speed and the stable tones when delivering the speech was the part I liked about the presentation.
Speaking Feedback Date: 16/04/22 Speaker: YeonJinYou Evaluator: YeonJinYou Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have? I think visual materials, voice tone and speed of speech was good. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I think my introduction about vacation idea was good so audiences can get to know the speech subject well. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. I prepared many interesting place and features of Cuba. And I also made visual aids to make audiences to understand more easier. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? I think my voice tone and speed was good. But pronounce of some word was not clear. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? My opening was interesting and make people want to know about Cuba more. Also body was well-organized and conclusion was summarized very well. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I didn't make good eye contacts. I saw note card so many time. I really have to practice to make good eye-contact 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think I have to memorize more contents and practice to make good eye-contact and body posture naturally. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I like my visual aids and contents of speech.
Speaking Feedback Date: 16/04/22 Speaker: Yeon Jin You Evaluator: Kang dong hee Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her preparation for the speech was impressive such as visual materials such as powerpoint. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I think her introduction about cuba was very enthusiastic 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes, as I wrote above, her preparation was nice. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Most of her speech was audible. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? She divided her speech well into three parts. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I guess she was a little bit nervous. Eye contacts were not enough, though it was a good speech. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think it will be better if she makes her voice louder. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked her preparations and contents of speech.
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ReplyDeleteDate : April 22th, 2016
Speaker: You Yeon-jin
Evaluator: An Do-woo
Title : A great vacation idea.
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She has a stable posture during presentation.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I could get much information about the area.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Given that she has many contents in her speech,
I can tell she is prepared.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
I could hear clearly and fully understand what she told.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. The speech can be divided into three parts.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I think she looks at the notes too much. Because of this, eye contact lacked.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If she used more gestures and eye contact, it would be better.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Her clear voice was very impressive.
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ReplyDeleteDate: 16/04/22
Speaker: Jayne Yoo
Evaluator: Yeon Jin You
Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She maintained good speed and tone, so I could understand her speech very well.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
It was easy to find out that she is talking about the vacation idea to Cuba.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. Her contents was informative and she also prepared the presentation slides. One thing is that it would have been better if she memorized more of her scripts so she didn’t have to look at the note so often.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. Her voice and tone was clear and audible. The speed was good too.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. It was well structure, but seemed to not have the preview part.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It would have been better if she didn’t held her note card too high and read directly from it. I think making more eye contacts with audience is needed.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think, smiling less and speak more formally would have helped her look more professional. Also, making more eye contacts and using smaller note card would have improved the speech.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the contents of the speech. Also, adequate speed and the stable tones when delivering the speech was the part I liked about the presentation.
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ReplyDeleteDate: 16/04/22
Speaker: YeonJinYou
Evaluator: YeonJinYou
Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I think visual materials, voice tone and speed of speech was good.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I think my introduction about vacation idea was good so audiences can get to know the speech subject well.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. I prepared many interesting place and features of Cuba. And I also made visual aids to make audiences to understand more easier.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
I think my voice tone and speed was good. But pronounce of some word was not clear.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
My opening was interesting and make people want to know about Cuba more.
Also body was well-organized and conclusion was summarized very well.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I didn't make good eye contacts. I saw note card so many time. I really have to practice to make good eye-contact
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think I have to memorize more contents and practice to make good eye-contact and body posture naturally.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like my visual aids and contents of speech.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 16/04/22
Speaker: Yeon Jin You
Evaluator: Kang dong hee
Title: A great vacation idea
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Her preparation for the speech was impressive such as visual materials such as powerpoint.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I think her introduction about cuba was very enthusiastic
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, as I wrote above, her preparation was nice.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Most of her speech was audible.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She divided her speech well into three parts.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I guess she was a little bit nervous. Eye contacts were not enough, though it was a good speech.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think it will be better if she makes her voice louder.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked her preparations and contents of speech.