Monday, April 18, 2016

lee soojung/My vacation idea/Friday 5-6

4 comments:

  1. Date : 2016.04.22
    Speaker:Lee Soo Jung
    Evaluator: Kim Mi Ji
    Title : My vacation idea (Singapore)

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    Speed and diction of the overall speech was good. I was able to fully understand all of them.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    She introduced about Singapore’s famous attractions, delicious foods based on her experience, and some information about transportation.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. She didn’t make much mistake and also prepared a note card.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. She talked clearly and audibly that I didn’t had difficulty in understanding.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. She had a well structured opening, body, and conclusion. I was able to find out exactly when she would start, and finish.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She prepared a note card, and had a good eye contact. She didn’t rely too much on her notes.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    It would have been better if she used some hand gestures.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    The content of the speech was useful.I also liked the part where she said "Your journey starts from now." at the conclusion.

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  3. Date : 2016.04.22
    Speaker: Lee SooJung
    Evaluator: Kang Hyunyoung
    Title : My vacation idea (Singapore)
    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    I think her tone of voice and pronunciation is very nice for delivering the speech.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    She began her speech based on her own experience, and I think it made the audience feel more familiar about the speech subject.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, she seemed confident in delivering the speech.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, she had a clear and audible voice which was easy to understand.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes, she fundamentally had a good structure. She also explained the overall idea before describing the specific details in the body, which made the presentation more organized.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She used her note cards very effectively, and her eye contact with the audience was perfect.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    I think it would have been better if she used visual aids such as pictures of the things she introduced about Singapore.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I personally liked the way how she organized her presentation. Developing the speech by introducing her personal experience about the vacation place made the speech more interesting.

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  4. Date :2016/04/22
    Speaker:Lee Soo Jung
    Evaluator:Kang dong hee
    Title :My vacation idea(singapore)

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    Contents were so great. I was really impressed.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    She introduced about singapore's fancy attractions and delicious foods
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    yes, I guess she did.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    her diction was pretty good, yes.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    her speechwas well divided into three parts.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    she was looking at the note cards often, but also had a lot of eye contacts with audiences.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    I think the speech will be greater if she makes her voice a little bit louder.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked her strong opinion about singapore.

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